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Ian
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Registered: July 2006 Location: Hemel Hempstead UK Posts: 9,054
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Tue 20, April 2010 10:56am
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A good effort, but I'm feeling something is missing; maybe she needs to be smiling more? She looks relaxed in her expression but it's not a relaxed position in the pose. Dare I say it again, but the copyright watermark especially in this shot is very intrusive. If it has to be there it shouldn't be going through the subject's forehead.
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Stephen
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Registered: July 2006 Location: Wakefield, W.Yorks. Posts: 4,319
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Tue 20, April 2010 6:19pm
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Rating: 8.00
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I must agree with Ian again, I do like the toning though and the use of the hat which for me gives it a slight western feel.
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Tue 20, April 2010 8:14pm
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I don't know how many times I've said about watermarking but I just didn't get time to do a special edit for DPN this time so sorry it annoys you. I use Facebook and upload proofs to an album there which prevents people just printing what they like. Most of the twits that use facebook wouldn't know how to edit the watermark out so please bear this in mind if I have watermarked an image.
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