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It was tough for these ladies out in the sun so here was so respite in the shade:
Again, I think mono works better - what do you think?
Ian
In response to some feedback the vertical bar that was lighter than the rest seemed to chop the image in half so I have darkened it. There was a stray defocused hair that I have removed using PS CS6 Content Aware Fill. I have also added contrast to give the image more punch.
I was going to mention that Ian but did not want to appear picky.
It's a very nice what we used to call a F4 portrait shot.
For me and this is purely from a personnel point of view I would have used some negative clarity just on the skin tones of the main subject as the B&W conversion and extra contrast has accentuated the skin detail perhaps a tad to much.
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Regards Paul
One day I hope to be the person my dogs think I am.
I was going to mention that Ian but did not want to appear picky.
It's a very nice what we used to call a F4 portrait shot.
For me and this is purely from a personnel point of view I would have used some negative clarity just on the skin tones of the main subject as the B&W conversion and extra contrast has accentuated the skin detail perhaps a tad to much.
Completely agree - indeed I did apply negative sharpening to part of her face but I was perhaps not aggressive enough.