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Mono portrait

Here's another from the Brighton day:



Mariana was struggling with the light in her eyes. This was on the beach with a large reflector shining strong sunshine back at her. I thought black and white would do this frame justice and I'm certainly pleased with the result. It's quite a tight crop - only a quarter of the original frame has survived.

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Not only are you showing us an excellent portrait, the quality provided by the 45mm is impressive.
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I love the tight crop. It's a super picci.

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Re: Mono portrait

The tight crop does it for me, that and the strong eye contact
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Re: Mono portrait

Here is the original frame to illustrate the edits:



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Re: Mono portrait

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Here is the original frame to illustrate the edits:

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Thanks for that. It really is a very nice picture, with or without the edits.

I reckon you turned a you turned an already beautiful picci into a stunner with those edits. Lovely pose by Mariana too.

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Re: Mono portrait

I much prefer the mono Ian, a very nice portrait indeed.
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I much prefer the mono Ian, a very nice portrait indeed.
Of course, I wasn't happy at all with the colour original so I attacked it with vigour! I have only shown it here to demonstrate the transformation from the original.

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Re: Mono portrait

the mono is a great image!
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Re: Mono portrait

Thanks Dave

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