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Unusual one for me.
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13-12-06, 06:51 AM
That's an interesting bit of terrain there, so interesting that I'd like to see more detail in the rock outcrop (lighten it, or less contrast, maybe?). Also, the bright green grass and red leaves in the foreground seem take my attention away from the cliff and gravel(?) slope. If the bright foreground wasn't there, the smaller patches of green and red under the trees would act as an accent to the neutral tones of the scene rather than overpower them as the foreground does now. Just my tuppence (how's that for an English term? ;) )
Out of curiosity, do you live around there? It looks like a very interesting bit of geology.
That's an interesting bit of terrain there, so interesting that I'd like to see more detail in the rock outcrop (lighten it, or less contrast, maybe?). Also, the bright green grass and red leaves in the foreground seem take my attention away from the cliff and gravel(?) slope. If the bright foreground wasn't there, the smaller patches of green and red under the trees would act as an accent to the neutral tones of the scene rather than overpower them as the foreground does now. Just my tuppence (how's that for an English term? ;) )
Out of curiosity, do you live around there? It looks like a very interesting bit of geology.
I'm about a 30 minute drive away. I agree about the colours in this one. Certainly not one of the better ones of the area.